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The first half put me in a trance, Like day dreaming xD. What I can say though, is that I prefer the 2nd one. I love those chords. Its not as calm as the first, but its more moving.
So yeah, Well done :D
What I think you could do though, is fade the first one out just before the second one starts with that chord.
5/5 8/10
Author's Response:
Do you mean make the piano start right as the first half is done? Thanks for the review :)
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Let me just say that this is nothing like trance. -_- Where's the uplifting melody? The off-beat bass? Its techno...
Right. This was kinda strange. It would suit a little animation or something :P
Not much I can really say though, its a loop. Maybe if you added a bass or something it'd sound fuller.
Try to spend 2 Hours or more on songs, that way you can fix problems and make it sound overall better.
4/5 6/10
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K, nice riffs and melodies and stuff, but that lead is TOO loud! I think you mastered the High's and lows too much, but not much from the middle. The bass and Synths are all I can hear. You need to re-master xD the drums are WAAAY to quiet!
Anyways, Good Job :P Your bass wasn't really heavy and sharp enough to be this kind of trance. Add compression and a Bass Boost on there and it should be ok.
5/5 7/10
Author's Response:
you're right about the drums some times. And a bass boost is OK I think...
tx for the review
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You're pretty Good, even if these are covers from Games xD
I like your choice of synths, cheesy ones that suit games :P
Its nice and calm, but I think the bass is too quiet >.>
Maybe there coiuld've been some variation, like your own twist on the song. It kinda repeats itself over and over :P
But nice track :] Very calming.
7/10 5/5 ^_^
Author's Response:
i want to add twists but i am terrified of ruining the song... its not the easiest thing for me i'm really critical of my own work. thanks for the review man!
~KyuubiT~
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Your piano is pretty damn cool :D but its just too soft with those saws in there. Maybe you should EQ it like I do at the High end? Makes a little harsher :P
I like what you did the starts and stops at the intro, but you could've made the synths stand out moar!
Nice Piano solo xD Was pretty smooth. Just put a really quiet pad under thre and everything should be Ooookay :P
9/10
5/5
<(^^,)>
Author's Response:
Whaaaa thanks for tha review :D
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Has that calm feel :P Well It is softcore xD
I like your little arp, and your fades are never boring. Makes arp seem a little less repetitive too :P
At the end though, You could've put a snare with that kick roll, just a small one :P
It loops really well O.o I didn't realise it was playing again xD
5/5 9/10
Smooth stuff :D
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This is a joke. Do you know what a bass is? Or what bass is?
this is like... someone hitting a metal sheet..
Author's Response:
well its like that but in a way.
i'am ronay to.
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Hey, Peeps still think you're a girl? Lawl!!
I see you tried a pendulum style. Nice reese!
I like the kick rolls and Synths. Very cheesey Pendulum like (if that makes sense) :P
Doubt You'll read this but I reckon you should make more Drum n Bass stuff. Not Trancestep :P
8/10 and a 5/5
^^^ Only coz Its a bit short and you are a little overrated. I've heard better, but this is near the top :P
Well done though, Make some more stuff like this :P
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Jesus Christ Rig! This is awesome!
The sidechaining on the synths and bass sound exactly like Signalrunners - Recoil2 (Mat Zo Remix)
srsly this is just amazing. I love the breakbeats in the middle, but The start was the best with the sidechaining.
The vocals are awesome! they fit like perfectly. I just cant point out anything wrong...
This could be the First ng song im Downloading :P
Keep it up, You could get signed with this.
5/5 10/10
Btw I was inspired by the pic on the thread, but this is so much more inspiring :P
*RAVE*
Author's Response:
Signed, eh? That could be interesting.
Haha, thanks for the review! Glad I was able to encourage you :D
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"This is Pretty decent for a first try :P"
I like the synths and leads all the way through, but your samples were a little basic, maybe if you try getting some new VSTi's from www.kvraudio.com?
The fade out was a good idea, but I think it happened to fast and that the kick should have been faded in. other than that, Its pretty good :P
Sounds like classical.
/ for effort
Author's Response:
Thank you for the honest opinion... Glad to know there's places to get new instruments... As I was a bit stuck at some points trying to get some good ones... Usually I just edit the 3xOsc preset and try and get a synth sound similar to what I need.
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