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"Was this the song you meant? :P"
5'd 4.08 / 5.00 (+ 0.032)
anyway, Teh song structure is great, but it just doesnt really go anywhere. Its like the same thing repeating, or just one Huge build up :P
I was expecting a huge chorus somewheres, then it finishes x[
But, nice melody, nice piano, nice bass. Just another riff in there and some really tense build ups. You'll geta good song out of it :]
8/10
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sr4cId is wrong, this is trance. (I shoudl know, Its all I listen to)
anyway. Very nice melody, it seems a little bare though. I think your bass is a little too quiet, bring that up a little and it should sound a bit more whole.
It gets a little repetitive though. Maybe you could add another theme in? Like another melody but using the same notes. also if you could add a lead that would be awesome.
Nice FX too though :P
9/10 5/5
d[+_+]b Sp1r1T d[+_+]b
Author's Response:
Thx i noticed the bass problem (works fine with my Pc)
Check out my other Submission i think it´s much better then this one.
ANyway thx for Reviev ^-^
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I think its a little slow for drum n bass, it'd fit better in techno too. The melodies aren't really trance like :P
The whole composition was cool. It was a little bare though. Maybe Master it or add some compression to it.
But overall, It is really nice and smooth, could be used as a game menu or something ;D
voted 5 4.64 / 5.00 (+ 0.014)
8/10
d[+_+]b Sp1r1T d[+_+]b
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I knew you were good, but this just sounds Professional!
I swear, the mastering on this is perfect. It gives you the right energy to get up and dance, and theres so much going on its just amazing.
Seriously, This song is good enough to get you signed.
I could go into more detail, but "I cant be bothered" xD
10/10 5/5 (Rare scores for me) :P
4.57 / 5.00 (+ 0.0029)
d[+_+]b < Sp1r1T )
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Mysterious :P
Very nice panning sounds, its like something lasgo would make :P
I like your synths, but it just feels empty, even thought there is lots going on. Having you tried Mastering it to make out sound a little more full?
Your transitions were also pretty good, but the first transition to the melody is a little sudden. Maybe if you could fade something out or in with volume or Use the fruity free filter with Low pass.
It has a nice vibe to it too. Its quite calming.
Anyway, a deserved 4/5 and a 9/10 :]
Author's Response:
Thanks man. This isn't my final version though... this one was just fitted in for the mac contest. I'll tell you when my full is released.
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hey Zenon :)
I really like your instrument samples. Where did you get the indian ones from? :P
The funky drum beat at the start is awesome. this is one of my faves. PLease extend :P
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Your melodies are awesome :P You chose the right synths, but to me they sounded like presets off z3ta+ or nexus etc. Maybe you made your own and it sounds the same, Idk.
Your songs sounds like uplifting trance a little, but I guess it comes under eurodance :P (I listen to lots of trance, and the notes you used are in a main scale used in trance)
Your transitions were nice and sneaky xD
Vengeance Essential Clubsounds <3
yeah anyways, great song! I dont have the patience to make a 5 minute song xD How long did it take ya?
5/5 for effort, its hard making a long song :D
9/10 for the overall greatness of the song xD
P.S check out a few of my tracks, I've been top 5'd 3 times so I think I'm doing ok :P
Author's Response:
ya just got vengeance essential club sounds.
they are presents from z3ta+ but for some of the synths i changes a few things around and made chords. to me it sounded perfect and didnt need changing.
thanks for the reveiw. im not sure how i can have a score of 3.46 if people say they like it :\
thanks for the reveiw :D
DaNReD
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The songs good for tension, but the 1st thing I've gotta say, is that its no where near being trance. Its techno.
The melodies were good, but you could've changed the synths you were using a little.
Check out my new song, Flying Free Please :]
4/5 7/10
Author's Response:
If your going to rate my songs lower, just to say You have a new song, don't bother.
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The melody Is great, the vocals, not too bad, but theyre pretty loud :P
The song is quite repetitive though, The same riff over again just with different effects and synths.
Good effects, and the breakbeat was cool. I think you just need to master your songs.
4/5 8/10 d[+_+]b
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Good first song, But its not really drum n bass :P
You need a heavier bass, thats fast and powerful with edgy dark riffs.
Your BPM needs to be around 170-180 and you need to learn the Amen Break :P
Try some other genres and see how you go on.
<(^^,)>
4/5 7/10
Author's Response:
yeah i was thinking that and i do plan on working on some other genres plus thanks for the tip i'll keep that in mind ^^
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