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[[FS]Solitude (NG Cut)]

Something is happening...

Chode is evolving!

FuckSandwich responds:

Congratulations! Your chode evolved into your grandmothers flaps!

[Major Dickface]

I hope

You left the Shaft Guitar loop in there.

C:

Koriigahn responds:

hohohohohohohohohohohohoh

[Psychadelika - The Jungle]

Man,

The bass is weak, its thin, barely heard and not even deep.

The track doesnt fit into the genre at all. Wheres the break? Its a basic 4 on the floor loop. Seriously, listen to some DnB and then listen to this track.

Big Difference.

Speculant responds:

I don't know how to categorize this song. If someone could tell me what genre this song most fits into, I would be more than happy to change it.

(I don't really listen to DnB much, so I apologize about the mis-categorization)

[xKore - Star Shower (NG Cut)]

omgroflcopter

Reminds me of the First ever Sonic in the Starlight zone thing. OMG SONIC.

But yeah, go get signed already, and I'll spin some electro with you :3

The chorus Should have more power though. Thats all.

bai nger.

xKore responds:

sup nger

Maybe it's because it's influenced heavily by asian videogame scores, I dunno. I've listened to that song before and it does kinda sound like that kinda sound :)

also YO DUDE U CHECKD MY ELECTRO SET? ITS OFF DA CHAIN BOY

[Newngrunds Trans Parondies]

Gaaaagagaga.

You'r a funny kid ;D

I can call you a kid coz Im older LOLAOAOAL.

But yeah.

+ SEND ME THE COLLAB.ZIP

JEESUS.

Koriigahn responds:

SENT.

LOLOL.

[Misdirected (Breakbeat_05:09)]

Very Different :)

I like experimental pieces, and this was pretty cool. I like the jazzy elements like the stabs and strings, along with the driving bass.

Wow. Very nice Chords after the build up. Its awesome! ^^

People reading this should note that they should listen to further in the song, its different to the start and its really good :D

I like your subs on the kicks too.

Gj!

9/10 5/5

RNNR responds:

Thanks :D

Funny anecdote, a friend of mine listened to it and cut it off right before the 'good' part started.
Listen to the full song people! Otherwise you're missing out xD.

[Karco - Time For Morning]

Oh Wow...

Your Chords, Bassline and Rhodes are just Breathtaking.

Its just Amazing... I've never heard any Trance song other than any of yours Sound so good on This Site.

I think after the build up with the Kick roll, It could've sounded a bit fuller, but the bassline soon makes up for that.

I feel so wrong Giving Constructive Crtisism to someone who Knows exactly that They're doing .:P

Good Job Anywayz :]

5/5 9/10

Karco responds:

Heh, lucky you Sp1r1t, I'm making a 2009 remake of this track. :D

I believe the bass came in right after the kick roll? Unless you mean the square synth - this track was originally supposed to have vocals but with the unsavable state the mix was in (as I actually DIDN'T know what I was doing in several senses during the beginning of the production of this track) I figured it wasn't worth the effort.

Thanks for the review!

[Tranced 2.50 Chron Mix]

Hmmmmmmmmmmm.

The melody is good, but the song is really Thin :P

And the bass is too Quiet! >:|

Chrons gotta sort that out lol.

The transistions could've been more Powerful too, but Its still a good song :P

7/10 5/5

wii1 responds:

blame it on chron :P

[MH16: Day & Night]

Nice Drums :P

But First things first, All your instruments are too loud :P

You need to turn them all down.

Start my Making the Kick the Most Prominent at -6dB, and make sure that the rest of the percussion can be Heard but not above the level of the kick.

You can make your leads around -7dB to keep the power, and you can always EQ them, but just make sure its not too over powering.

Your melody was decent, but It didn't really have a nice Uplifting Feel.

Good Job though, this is only Constructive Critisism.

4/5 7/10

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for this advice!
I'm just beginning to make songs, so constructive is always welcome :-)
I'm going to try to do all that now. Hope it turns out good :P

MH16